I think that the better answer is that the industrial revolution created economic opportunities for the middle class (bourgeoisie) and the desire for profits without government interference. Transcontinental railroads made possible people movements from agricultural farms to urban cities. Electricity, new machines and inventions atractted people to industrialized environments. These facts emerge subsequently into capitalism because the increase of the desire of posessions and the persuit of a wealthy life.
Sentence 4. In each of the countries, the industrial revolution resulted in increased urbanization, changes in employment, and new technologies that changed the way people worked and lived.
The correct answer is nº4.
A thesis statement is used to summarize in 2-3 lines the main argument that will be developed along a much longer piece of text that usually comes right after. In this case, in nº 4 describes very broadly the most important characteristics of the Industrial Revolution (IR) period, including both some causes and consequences of this process. The new technologies that were implemented to enhance the productivity of the manufacturing activities led to new production systems, that required different type of employees and a big number of them. Industrial workers lived in cities so there was an important shift of population from rural to urban areas, that could offer more job positions than the agricultural industry in the countryside. All this meant a great change in society and in the way of life of the majority of the population in industrialized regions.
The other sentences in this introduction paragraph only mention specific aspects of the IR process. In turn, number 4 provides a relation of the main aspects that have to be commented for sure if speaking about industrialization.
The correct answer is the following.
The sentence that needs most revision is "People should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it."
It needs revision because the sentence can use better words to compose a better sentence with more academic language that strengthens the conclusion of the essay. There are better terms to identify that idea that wants to be conveyed that would give the conclusion a more formal way to present the concept.
The Industrial Revolution created economic opportunities for the middle class (bourgeoisie) and the desire for profits without government interference.
Yes, it is true that the Industrial Revolution had some setbacks and disadvantages. But the advances in industry, communication and transportation far outweigh any problems.
People should stop focusing on the bad stuffs and notice all the good sides to it.
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